Tuesday, February 15, 2011

Writing

What I would like to focus on most is cohesion.  I generally have a hard time with writing.  Instead of having one main idea as my focus, I tend to keep having ideas pop into my head and continue to use those.  Because of this my writing becomes muddy.  I would like to better be able to develop one idea.  Because of my inability to develop my thoughts jump back and forth and there is a lot of unnecessary filler in my writing. My papers subsequently look undeveloped and do not flow.  I am self-conscious with my writing and usually get frustrated.  My transitions tend to be weak and therefore my papers ideas do not always link well.  If I were able to develop my thoughts better I think that would help move me towards my goal of having cohesion throughout my papers.

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